2017考研英语(一)抽象品质类写作——一幅图

考研英语来源：中公考研 2016-09-13　

考研英语(一)大作文以考查图画为主，根据内容可以分为以下三个类型，社会问题，社会现象，抽象品质。社会问题在英语一2000年之后，17年中考查了7次。此外，英语一的大作文，考查图画数量有一幅图，两幅图，并且一幅图的考查在2000年后的17年中占了12年，今天我们就重点来学习一下一幅图社会问题如何去写。

大作文第一段为图画描述段，应该重点去抓框架和重点，因此建议大家写4句话来构架文章的框架，分别是:直观评价;整体描述; 细节描述;过渡句。直观评价就是第一印象;整体描述指的是整个图中最大的动作或者所有人都在干什么;细节描述，需要大家去抓可以反映寓意并且比较容易表达的细节，即段首说的抓重点，最后一句话就是要做到承上启下。

第二段为阐述寓意，对于寓意的阐述，为了论点更好的展开，论证更加充分，建议大家对寓意结合不同的角度进行展开。对于一个社会问题，考生可以分析的角度很多，分析一个社会问题产生的原因，造成的恶劣影响，谈谈现状，等多个角度。这里面不再是老师以往强调的哪个角度会写写哪个角度，而是应该去深思哪一个角度可以得高分，去揣测出题人的目的和意图。对于考卷上呈现的社会的问题，考官最终的必然是期望这个问题能够解决，那为了从根本上解决问题，深层分析其原因则是十分有必要的。因此，建议考生，从原因角度去分析社会问题。此外，为了更好的实现语言的连贯性，在两个论证的观点之间一定要做好衔接，建议大家可以使用句子进行衔接

第三段为给与评论段，建议这一段多结合实际去谈，并且同样应该重视段落的框架性和衔接做到总分总结构，因此建议同学们也写三句话：关键句，具体建议，结尾句。

下面给大家展示一篇社会问题真题的范文，向同学们展示如何应用上述的思路。

二、2015年真题

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) interpret its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

Here is a picture, vivid and with profound implication. The painting describes a gathering of four friends who haven’t seen each other for a long time. However, if we give it a closer watch, it is pathetic to notice that all four persons are all absorbed in their cell phones without communicating with each other. Certainly, the clearly reflected implication that cell phone, to some extent, causes indifference among people should be given due attention.

There exists lots of explanation for this problem, but I hold the idea that the following two are the most crucial ones. In the first place, cell phone provides us diversified entertainments and information distracting our attention, and makes friends less necessary than before. If you regard this reasonable, I may go further. Another proper analysis in this case is that education stresses rote learning and test over the ability to deal with people and to maintain friendship. No other case can better illustrate what I have discussed than the drawing before.
Based on the analysis above, it is of high necessity for us to adopt measures to tackle this issue. Of all the methods, mass media should function fundamentally in the job. Only in this may can we ultimately resolve the problem and embrace a hopeful future.